00:00
00:00
Newgrounds Background Image Theme

WannabePyx just joined the crew!

We need you on the team, too.

Support Newgrounds and get tons of perks for just $2.99!

Create a Free Account and then..

Become a Supporter!

Reviews for "Expressive."

it was ok...

It had potential, and it could have been made better if you tried... 7/10 for now. Try remaking this, except adding effects

Liam3003 responds:

Im thinking about remaking this after christmas when I have my drawing tablet.
Thanks for the review!

damn

I can't say I didn't liked it, because I actually enjoyed it.
but it needs improving.
I'm not a flash artist, so i can't tell you certain things.
but..
for these kind of things.. I think its better to avoid the white background, as you did in the begining.
also, avoid the hughe
THANK YOU FOR WATCHING!
makes it annoying, try to keep it discrete.

Hmm

Interesting. It was pretty godd for a sencond flash, I remember my second (which, was like 2 vids ago =P) Was junk, and this cerainly tops it. But At the end u said u gave up because it was crap, if u have that attitude u will never finish a vid! I always used 2 get bored also. But if you put your mind to it, the end results will be magnificent.

good

it is not bad, a little wird but it is realy inspiring how you can make a prety good flash with simple lines and circles. you could sense the feelings in this video... pretty good!

7/10

Very pleasant, but it would have been nice if it had been more in time, with the music.

Liam3003 responds:

When its played in Flash, its in time.. I dont know why but it seems to have missed a frame, im working on it.
Cheers!