Awsome
Great job on this, but you cut corners on the animae, make it slower next time. But you obiously put alot of work into this, so 10/10. And yes, I will vote 6! lol
Reviews for "Madness Streak Ep. 4"
GabrielBarsch responds:
thanks guy, I can wait for madness elite 4 but please, put a preloader in your animations
P.S. (you know to make buttons in flash movies?)
It was okay...
But you really need to take time on your animations, don't think that you have to get your movies out as soon as possible. Take time on your movies, even if it takes a year. I mean, pretty much everything in the movie is rushed. The Art was rushed, such as the lightening bolts, they were just random squiggles, not much concept. Also that part where he knocked a grenade into that one room, the blood was awful in it. You should have used a smaller size brush to give the idea of blood splatter to the viewers. The animation was choppy, there wasn't much gravity or physics. WHich matter alot. Some of the guns had no kickback. When you fire a gun, your whole body slightly moves back or leans back a bit. And the gun flips back too. In certain parts it was hard to tell what some of the characters were doing simply because of rushed animation.
Also, I don't care much about this certain thing because I speak English buuuuut...
Some of the subtitles for the translation from English to Spanish(?) were hard to read. They were crammed low on the screen which was just sorta, "meh" Maybe you should change the color of the text for future products, something bright like red, or white maybe.
Now to the good side.
It isn't really much improvement but I'de say this is your best movie that you put up. It was nice and lenthy, which is always cool. You captured some of the nicest kills, but you didn't animate them right.
GabrielBarsch responds:
this is not spanish, this is portugese
Pretty decent
Try to clean it up a bit, it is a bit skippy and sloppy. But other wise good job.
wewt
You take all the points for creativity (lol heart attack XD), the only complaint is the spiky blood spot on the floor, it could be more organic.
(P.S.: Começar é com "ç" :P)
-gabs
GabrielBarsch responds:
lolol sorry
alrightit
it was alright just needs better blod animation
GabrielBarsch responds:
you are a bloody guy