hmmm.
Its a little too fast and could use some more length, but is an interesting story.
hmmm.
Its a little too fast and could use some more length, but is an interesting story.
Yes its an interesting story.
But as i said before im a litel lazzy.
And drawing page from page is preaty hard...
Little on the poor side...
Ok the text was a little too fast. The graphics, well can't say much for mouse paintings. At least there was music in it. But it was ok. Try to slow down text next time. Better yet put in voices. Add some more humor too. But just a little poor. So try a little better next time. You definitely have some potential Retrato.
-Leader of the L7C
Well to tell you the truth im just a litel lazzy.
But i realy knew the text was fast but i saw it when it was done so i couldent fix it...
But for Retratos Chrismas 2 and Violent Life 2 it will be alot slower so that you can actualy read what is on it lol!
Thanks for the review and the tip. :)
I Voted 5
Always happy to show my support for the Hayabusa Clan
pretty nice by the way
I think your the onlyone how found it to be nice lol!
But thanks for the 5!
Oh and 10! :P