wow
Congrats on your first submission! This is a pretty amazing trailer. You don't seem like a newcomer to flash at all, the graphics are suprisingly good, the animation is smooth and the little interface there is looks professional as well. I'm looking forward to the real thing as well, the plot seems pretty intense. keep it up!
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Thank you very much! I've used flash for my job, so I know my way around it more or less. But I never animated before. This is my 3rd piece in animation. The first trailer for this movie is on my site, this is much much better hence why I chose to post this one on here instead of the other.
I'm currently trying to get the book series published and the first one is currently in the Amazon Breakthrough Novel contest.
pretty good
certainly not perfect, but pretty good. just a few issues: the text at the beginning was too long and there wasn't enough time to read them before they disappeared. then the music stopped before the movie did. i'm guessing it did fine before it was on here, but the lag from the battle scene caused it to be thrown off. you could alleviate that by either putting the music on stream or shortening the first scene where nothing happens but clouds and blowing grass. and of course there's the slight roughness of the art and animation, but that will improve with experience. but yeah, looking forward to see what you can come up with in the first episode. i'm assuming there's going to be a first episode. there is, right?
Technically it's going to be a full movie. I'm splitting it up into 10, 10 minute episodes. Between my job, writing the 4th book, and finishing my art compilation book it'll be interesting to see when this gets done.
Actually it didn't which is weird. The music normally ends around the text after the last drawn scene which is weird. Oh well, I just cut out 20 seconds of clouds (what the hell was I thinking?) New version should be up within the hour.