wow not bad at all
I like the music and animation is cool !
Reviews for "Shattered Heaven Trailer"
nice work
the animation was a bit laggy and lacking but all around, good plot you have there, who knows, that may happen hopefully b4 I'm dead so I can get in on some action lol
Great artwork
As I said, the drawings are very high quality...but WOW, did that ever move slow. After about 20 seconds of just watching clouds and stars, I was about to close the window, thinking that's all there was. Need fewer huge pauses.
AdamTilford responds:
Yeah, it was 2 am for me and I knew I was off today so I figured I'd throw it up here and get some critiques for when I go to polish it up. I'm awake now so hurray for early morning polishing.
Has potential
For what it is, this does a fairly good job. There are a few ways that I think it could be improved though. The opening text is slightly unimaginative, and although it's necessary, I don't think the audience is really captivated by the flash at that point. Perhaps you could condense the text itself a little and get some voice acting in there, would make it much nicer.
Despite my slight criticisms, I think the idea itself is a good one, and the background music was a nice choice for a trailer. Hope you find the time to actually make this.
It dragged on...
The part with the clouds in the beginning was way too long. I didn't think it would ever end. Trailers need to be short, give you a good plot summary and make you want to watch the movie. Once it started into the action it was really good. Really good FBF stuff. I know you were probably just trying to sync it up with music, but please shorten the part with the clouds.
AdamTilford responds:
Lol, I'm doing that now!