Very Interesting
This was a great work of art. I thought Miles Davis "So What" fit in well, as I am a big fan. 5/5 from me.
Reviews for "Walter Joyce"
Masquatto responds:
The second I heard "So What" I know it was perfect for a monotonous rain scene. :P Miles Davis is simply classic. Thanks. :]
So very amazing.
Truly, this is a masterpiece of the modernist genre.
It's been a long time since I've taken the time to leave a review, as will it probably be some time before I leave another...but this deserves my praise, and I'm happy to give it.
I'm a creative writing professor at my local college, and I can tell you from experience that you have created something quite marvelous.
Keep it up, and I may have to come out of "retirement" again!
Kudos.
Masquatto responds:
Wow. I didn't think I'd be that noteworthy. :D
I'm actually not a huge writer. :0 I find it quite cool that a writing professor likes my stuff. :P
Thanks for taking the time to review.
This was done in two days? This was quality work.
Very impressive. Your storytelling skills are top-notch, and your flash is actually better than most of the dreck you see in the Portal. Well done. You got my 5-vote.
Masquatto responds:
:) That's very flattering. Thanks.
You're a good storyteller!
Nicely done
Masquatto responds:
Wai thank you sir.
Ooooh, creepy! (^_^)
Stellar. Lovely short-story style, great use of the 'snow' effect.
I actually enjoyed the inaudability of the voice-overs during the room sequence, felt as though the 'ambient noise' was taking over a bit, which seems to be important to the story.
Why an informant and not something creepy like a relative or random stranger? I'd also have thought he'd be killing a real person in the room, rather than illusions.
But, I read too much sci-fi, so that's just me.
Masquatto responds:
I'm happy you think so. :}
Heh, yeah, I suppose that does kind've make sense.
A relative would've been an interesting idea. Maybe I should've done that.
They could've been real. :P