Voices are a bit quiet.
I found that the VA was quite quet and at some parts I had to listen really carfully to catch what their saying. So next time you could maybe make them a little louder. Not that bad animation. The coffee bit is not that good but I suppose it's part of the story now so you gotta' keep it.
You got a 9/10 and 4/5 from me.
Plenty of potential
I'll have to agree with Runescape-Rules down there, the voices are very hard to understand (and, again, not because of the accents). They were very "tinny", and audio was pretty inconsistent, e.g., the sound of rounds being fired from the crotch gun were very faint as opposed to how they sounded when they pinged off the shark.
I found the whole coffee theme a bit corny, to be honest, didn't seem very relevant at all. But there's seriously a lot of potential here, and improving voice quality should help heaps. Great illustration style, love Jezza's design and voice, and the occasional winner one-liners: "I can tell by your ear piercings that you're up to no good."
Looking forward to part two!
Yeah, the coffee thing is more of a homage to all those food/fruit based characters in classic mangas like Dragon ball
That was...
Rather interestin'! Rather corny and "wtf is going on?" kind of stuff, but still interesting.
'interesting' is my forte
That was fantastic
Other than the average animation, PERFECT!
Length, Humor,....a little carrot looking fellow, this has it all! Can't wait for more!
genius
bloomin genius, HAS to become a series