Alright I'm not trying to shoot down your submission, but instead give you constructive criticism that might help you improve with the next one you decide to make. Here it goes:
There's a low score here because I base this on the Top 50 flash movies in the portal, and this just did not seem to make the cut for anything really as graphics at all. Normally for a tutorial or something there would be a somewhat higher score, but this basically fit into the category of "picture gallery." If you had stuff going on in the background so that it wasn't just a black screen, then this would be a little bit more interesting to look at. Of course you want your viewer to be able to see what you're presenting, but at the same time you want to impress us as well.
You had a good selection of music (I say this because ParagonX9 is one of my favorite audio contributors), but what happened to the other sounds? I really thought you could have added the sounds that the errors make sometimes for every time you clicked "NEXT." That would have really added on to the effect of clicking through a set of Windows errors. Any extra sounds you add on wouldn't have been too much or too little either, there's a lot you could have done extra that would have made your score higher here.
There were some funny error messages in there that I really enjoyed seeing, such as the one about the Penguin for example. The randomness of the messages really adds on to the flash, but I felt like something was missing from the Humor for some reason. I don't know what it is so I apologize!!!
We've all seen plenty of these movies out there having to do with Windows errors and flash errors and all of those kinds of things, but to separate yourself from the norm of movies you need to be able to add on your own unique style and add on things that you know will separate your flash from all of the rest. Try and make more to do within your flash, and add on all kinds of things to make it seem better for the audience you're trying to please, and your score will rise significantly.
I know my scores don't really add up to being a 4/10, but most of the low score came from my personal preference of the movie. I feel like, no offense, but this was a mediocre kind of picture gallery. But at the same time I feel like you could have made this a much funnier and much more enjoyable movie by just adding in some animations and that sort of thing. Keep in mind I'm not trying to ruin your day with my review, but just help you instead. Nice work, and keep on improving!
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