it was nice but...
When they were 'dancing' it looked very very choppy and didn't fit very well.
Your character designs were nice, until they moved. Then they took a severe reduction in quality. Also, what is up with the vampires mouth it really doesn't look nice at all.Especially the way it just snaps back into his face as if it were neevr there.
Also the terragen'ed backgrounds don't really fit with the rest of your animation. It makes your drawing look worse than it actually is. This is due to the juxtaposition of semi-photorealistic scenes and hand drawn characters/scenes. Also, your items seemed to stick out far too much. They were very nicely done they just seemed out of place.
Example: in the scene where the main character is walking in front of the villager people with her sword, she was drawn impeccably while the people in the background looked like they were put in as an afterthought.
It was a good story even if it was a little cliched. You gave just the right amount of backstory and told it well within your time constraint.
You had some amazing cuts((Example being when the vampire jumped over her head and you did the pan around her)) But you must watch out because it is jarring to see her looking strangely different in every scene. Just as it is very jarring to have that nicel painted scene in the intro and immediately cut into the movie and its so much simpler drawn.
Also, Why did the necklaces turn green for that few frames in the flashback?
_Just my thoughts take them as such_