Room for a lot of improvement
Increase the FPS, make fight scenes longer and use more intense battle sounds...
Other than that.. it was ok! =O)
Room for a lot of improvement
Increase the FPS, make fight scenes longer and use more intense battle sounds...
Other than that.. it was ok! =O)
In VI i'll use Brawl/Melee music or something. xD
Room for a lot of improvement
Im sorry but this just isn't very good. The animation was slow, toss your frame rate up a bundle, to 24 or 26. Try to make the animations and fights longer. Not just Kirby bumping into an enemy, them falling over, and its over. Add depth to the fights. Frame by frame it. You've got a great story and something sort of new, but you just need to keep at it and work on it a little more before its ready for newgrounds.
Well....
It's not bad, but nothing personal but this doesn't deserve its own series tab, if your lucky it might get into the kirby collection but thats as far as it will go.
I would suggest working on the smoothness of your animations (it was a little choppy) It's an ok flash but just don't feel your self deserving of a series spot (you'll be let down by the result)
3/5 and 6/10