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Reviews for "<tangerines>"

wat

at the end the g looks like a dick hahahhaahhahahhahahahahahahhahahhajka hahahhahahaha

Maxaroni5 responds:

weinerdawg

har har

made me laugh - that is a bonus

Maxaroni5 responds:

cactus

Could be improved

I really liked the first part of this movie with the turtle, that was sweet. The rest of the movie wasn't really quite up to par. The people in the next scenes didn't look quite right. The lip sync also got worse.

Maybe you could try to use less fbf in the lip sync, and that dosen't mean to skip the fbf altogether, but just enough.

If you use the same "shadowed" style like in the turtle crawing, you'll have a great movie.

Maxaroni5 responds:

HEYHEYHEY: yeah, l wasn't really happy with this, but i like the everyone is someone in la part. however, there are a couple of extra movements in there, and i tried a new mor tankman talking style where you only animate like 5 mouths and then put them up and make it look "professional"

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Alright

Not bad for what it is, which is a test. I have a Wacom, and let me say that while they take a little getting used to, they are absolutely invaluable to anyone actually interested in digital art or flash animation. As for the lip syncing, it was a decent job, but I think that with more practice, you can improve much further. Some of the facial expressions seemed over exaggerated and kind of all over the place, but the general effect isn't bad. I can only offer one advice, and it really applies to any aspect of flash or art. Practice, Practice, Practice. You're doing a good job of it now, continue working on your flash and I guarantee good things.

Maxaroni5 responds:

wow, you have nice flashes too! oh wait......