It was
alright for your first movie. The graphics were fine, especially that it was your first. The story was...kinda strange, didn't appeal to me (might appeal to others) but had some funny parts. Pretty good.
Reviews for "Bunny Fight!"
Flaming-Fish responds:
Like I've said now, the audio and storyline was made about 6 or 7 months ago, and if I did it all again, I would definately change that.
Funny for the most part!
For a first Flash, this is pretty good!
I would suggest you not make the bunny sound like he's on shrooms though.
And somehow I knew who the winner was going to be. I just did. Called it and everything.
Anyways, good job and keep at it!
Flaming-Fish responds:
Ha!
Yeah, I realize that the audio is a bit screwed up, but that was recorded a few months ago. Funny about the kirby thing ^-^
Damn good flash
If this is your first flash, then i can't wait to see what you make once you get better. You have the determination to become a great artist on newgrounds. This is way better than any of the flashes that I've submitted, considering all my flashes were loops with penises. The only thing that really need working on was the story and the audio. Audio need a bit of tweaking, and story needed a bit of fleshing out. I felt that the introductory words didn't do it enough justice.
All in all, keep working on your skills, and you could make some great flash.
Flaming-Fish responds:
Thanks ^-^
Actually, both the audio and storyline were originally made about 7 months ago
Good job
Definitely all right for a first try :)
o;dgm;gr/
nice for your first flash movie
Flaming-Fish responds:
thanks though I'll remind you it isn't my first attempt