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arrrrr!!! jus kiddin it was kool!!! a bit slow on some parts but still cool!!!
Reviews for "Lost Hearts"
RWA responds:
Thanks,I'll try to speed it up in the sequels :)
Deadlines are lame
If you're actually going to continue this, don't bother if it's on a "deadline".Submit your deadline piece to your school or whatever and then make it half decent for us.I know you put effort into this but it just seems rushed and wasn't nearly as good as it could have been.
RWA responds:
Yup,the deadline kidan messed it up.I think next two parts won't be for contest,so no deadline (weeeeeeeeeeeeee...)
Kind of scary
I could give this a 10 because I know it took a decent amount of effort, but I will give you a 5. I liked it, and I thought it was actually scary to an extent because that's kind of what a scary dream consists of and it reminds me that I have many more dreams to go through.
I think that certain still scenes where there's only one image in the frame you didn't really take any time to put in any detail or realism into it, such as the bed and beside area, or the hallway and its dimensions. The beginning scenes were very descriptive with the railcars. Good work altogether.
RWA responds:
Yeah,I know.That is why there was a deadline for the movie,plus I was very busy,and couldn't totally give my time to animating this.I first wanted to do the whole story in one piece ,but again,the deadline,so I split it into 3 parts.
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that was O.K.
nothing out of the odaniary
needs more out there kinda story line. nice use of audio though.
and was that wat u call scary. ive seen things that will haunt u for the rest of ur life.
this flash was a puppy curlded up in someones arm compared to things ive seen.
hope to see better next tme. :/
RWA responds:
I tried my best.It's hard to ake a "shit-my-pants" flash,but I think it's at least "gave-me-a-chill" flash. Thanks for the review
*yawn*
Was that supposed to be scary? Was it supposed to make sense?
A poor kid's parents are killed and his uncle sends him a card saying "you're arrival is expected at xx:xx time." Pretty bastardly if you ask me. And so he takes the subway to the middle of the woods? And then the black cloud that turns into some guy that turns into a monster with sharp teeth. I'm trembling....with annoyence.
3 out of 10
RWA responds:
I know it doesn't make much sense at the end,but it'll be explained inparts 2 and 3