I listened to the whole thing before writing this and honestly, i think the piano made it worthwhile, the rest is sub-par. It just feels like something is missing. Seems there was at least some effort put into this though and i really like the way you ended it off with the piano. All in all a (almost) decent song.
Reviews for "Suppression of Mind"
Reali-tGlitch responds:
Twas a different time for me. I was worse at overall composition, and this was my first more proper dubstep piece. I'm honestly glad I stepped away from the genre
I think you've nearly got it.
Here's how to make it better:
If you like this kind of Dubstep, put more growls in it. If you're DAW doesn't let you do that, download some from www.looperman.com
The drop was weak. To make this better, add more bass (as I just said), and use WHITE NOISE to make the sound fuller. If you don't know what white noise is, try this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BzujrStf_TE (if that one doesn't help there are tons of videos out there)
That's about it.
Could you check out my music? That would be awesome!
SqueeGee
This was good
I do agree with bobbys1015, the piano was amazing. I don't think your drop was anti-climactic, in fact I think i worked really well. The one thing I felt this song was lacking was a variation of the bass tone, your warp and worbles could use a bit of variation also maybe trying to sync the feel of the base with the mood you already set up with the piano. When I first listened to the piano I was very chilled and was enjoying the mood, though your bass breaks that mood. Personally it felt a little out of place a more slow warp sound would have suited and fitted the piano much more. A song should be consistent in the feeling it gives your listener in my opinion, but hey I am not all that good at making music my self I have just listened to it my whole life.
Reali-tGlitch responds:
Yeah. It wa my 3rd attempt and I'm STILL even now trying to get the hang of dubstep. I'm no good at electro and rawr basses, the only exception being Virtuism (which even now is still getting voted down, while it's only at 4.06 or something. It was in the top on dubstep for a while... damn trolls)
Equasion of intencity
30 seconds- lovely
1:05- MIND EXPLOSION
2:25- Calming back down
2:55- Back to EXPLOSION
In all realness i loved it!
Reali-tGlitch responds:
Oh sun-AP! Things be gettin' mathematical up in this bitch! Wait... that's no equation :(.
Thanks for liking it regardless.
Pro
good song
Reali-tGlitch responds:
Thanks :)