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um... that was... umm... out there.... errr... i got a smile at the end though and you put in work 3/5 6.5/10
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um... that was... umm... out there.... errr... i got a smile at the end though and you put in work 3/5 6.5/10
Wasn't it just?
Good...
My only comments however are:
1) It should have been more snappy (faster cutting etc).
2) You should have done more of the play.
Anyway it was a good summary of the play and it was good work. Keep it up!
Yeh, I probably should have done it with faster cutting from scene to scene, but I did what I did of the play because my main aim was to get the important points across in as quicker time as possible.
Thanks for the review.
lol
tim u dick lol its funny and better than the old biddy crap!!!