Not to say it didn't keep me from watching it.
It was enticing enough for me to watch the entire thing. That's saying something. Your art style is basic, story is presented in a new way, but the ending is a bit cliche. I leaves me with a "I dunno" feeling. You will or you won't pass judgement. It's not to me to decide. But I wouldn't be surprised either way. Cause it was both Good...yet Bad also you know what I mean?
You've got a new way of story presentation, that's a good point. But the animation could use some work. The ending was eiher bad or good. I can't tell. This flash leaves me feeling very neutral.