You need some work....seriously
You'rer lucky I'm a light user or I would bash this movie to the grounds, but it's not crappy.
The movie was less than average, but not horrible. Could use more sound effects, better sprites, and something else that I can't think of. Anyway, get some more experience with flash and try again. Everyone starts off somewhere(and no, I haven't watch pt.2 yet).
Oh, and for people who are wondering why this is on the frontpage? Visit the forums more often or google "BBS: Tom please frontpage this movie". That should explain everything.