qiote good
it was quite good, but like the others said too , use spellcheck
good luck with future movies
Reviews for "Super Mario Bros. X"
uuuhh...
you know that option in one oof the toolbars? the spellcheck? used it recently?
Too much text not enough flash
Intro was too long and misspelled
and there was nooo action
nice start but...
It's a start
Spell check would be a good thing to use on the next one, the story does have potential, keep working at it, hope to see more.
Not only was it mostly intro...
Most of the intro was misspelled.
Cut the text down to a slide or two.
And use spell check, because the only thing more irritating than a bunch of words is a bunch of misspelled words.
Add in some more actual action and it can be good.
<3 -t