a lil info
one problem is that you didnt have any action or anything indicating what thos red dots/ the out break was.. it just showed there were bad!!.. next time show just a lil action to reel in the people... like the animation Tracer episode 1, it was slow in the begining and at the end it gave a little action like 15-20 secs of it and then said to be continued.. just throwing that out there maybe it could help you.... but nice animating