I agree, it was a little too mopy for regular clock flash, but you did a good job of making up for it with lots of profanity, which is definitely a staple of the crew.
I think you were probably the most deserving of all CFs that were clockified this month, and what suprised me along with so many other people is that you were also the newest. I'm glad that you have found a mod that will stick up for you, it's a great thing to have friends in the right places.
I can't give you any suggestions on your flash work since you've already surpassed me in ability, but hey, that's why you're a clock and I didn't make it. I can say that this is well-done for somone who is so new to the crew, though.