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Reviews for "Kite Plight"

Well done...

The work you put into this really shows. The hours you've spent on this are something I can only imagine. Although it is very good there are still some things you mite want to try and improve...
The story is fun and silly but at the same time its what we expect. Try and make your stories in to a game, by that I mean keep your audience guessing at whats going to happen next. If we see what we're used to seeing all the time, then it will become boring after a short period Don't take this the wrong way, it's only constructive criticism I mean no offense.

-Grizlybro

This was, okay I guess

Usually I enjoy star syndicate movies and find high rated flash shitty, but for some reason I kinda like this.

I like this!? O_O

HOLY SHIT THE WORLD IS ENDING, IT'S BEING EATEN BY A GIANT FAGGOT OH GOD WTF NOES!!1111

Well drawn but...

I liked the art and the animation, it's really impressive for an amatuer. However, you really fall short on the rest of your project. You said it took you a year to work on storyboards. What story? The story was basically a frame to frame rehash of an old Looney Toons episode, I was just waiting for the part where Elmer Fudd comes in and blows that Indian's head off. Not very creative or funny, well maybe if I was five years old and still in diapers I'd be rolling around holding my sides in clicking 5's in your favor like the rest of Newgrounds. Still, love the animated part, that was pretty tight, music was on sync but still too childish, everything else was a bit lackluster. Well good luck, don't take this as negative, you got talent, hope you get a new writer though because that's the only thing holding you back from being noticeable.

Fantastic

Perfectly synced music, and extremely fluid animation. Great work

Really good cartoon

A pretty good piece of work. The animation is perfect. I'll gladly watch others if it becomes a series :)