"What the fu-"
Well, uh, I liked the concept. But a) it was a pretty oblique way of manifesting the epiphany and b) the artist needs to sketch from a real gun. It looked like a melted water pistol. oh and c) the "plot" is pretty linear.
His victims get sucked back in - what does that mean? and then he sheds a tear for them. Why does he just now feel sorrowful? the fact that he's undertaking his own death?