Well you definitely need lots more practice, but
you could have also done a whole lot worse too. Aa E for effort5/5 and 10/10 is an early Christmas gift. HOHOHO
Reviews for "[ISH] - 39 Crow Vs. Yoshy"
Yoshy-Ryu responds:
I rofl since I put had 'JewGrounds' in the preloader..
Thanks for your review, dude.
I LIKE IT
MAINLY BECAUSE I MAKE STRANGE NOISES IN IT.
Eh. Alright.
One of the only problems were the voices.
they were too low, or too quiet, or too loud.
fix it.
and a minor this is that you should make it longer.
Keep working
When I saw the file size and name I knew I had a blam here, but I was wrong. The sprite animation was pretty good and the voice over was above average. I think if this author could use the same formula but make it a little longer and add a little more humor, he could have some serious portal worthy flash.