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Reviews for "Shonen Heroes EP1"

Not bad

seems like a good plot so far can't wait to see how it turns out. but there was a few problems I had for one its *Zoro* not *Zolo* Zolo is Zoro's crappy dubbed name which everyone knows that the subbed was so much superior to the dubbed ANY day.
Also Zoro's a hell of a lot better then sasuke anyday o.o; lol

Needs some serious work.

It was a good idea for the story, but it just... wasnt... quite... fast... enough. I don't mean to insult, but in order to keep someone's concentration on your story, you need to pick up the pace. I found myself staring blankly at the screen going, "Shut up and fight already, geez."

A few spelling errors aren't that terrible, but it might not be just me in seeing some characters represented by horrible red blocks.

Good idea, needs a better execution.

dynomo11 responds:

Spelling Errors!!!

Ok, and execution, so now I know what to work on more... I thank you for the comment. I will improve on these areas.

better animation, better sound

that music was so bad it got on my nerves in a couple seconds. a nice techno tune would have been nicer. consider that in EP2 if there is one coming out. also try and be more creative with sprite animation because the goku and freeza part was very boring and you should have cooler sprites too =) good luck with your next flash. I know you can improve!

dynomo11 responds:

Now this it the type of comments I want, so lets answer each one of your questions.

Goku vs Frieza part: Wasn't what I wanted but I had to make do.
Cooler Sprites: Ok I can try to find some.
Music: All the music is from one of the animes that was in this flash, so what can I say.
The Improve part:Now that the part I like the best, makes me even more determined to improve.

Yes there will be a number 2, when I fill like it. But at the moment Im going to do a another live action moive.