Could use a lot more work though. The concept is good. What you gonna need is basically, better gameplay, graphics and add a bit of music. And for the "dead-end" choices, make it at least that the player can fight back or do something even though in the end he dies. This way, as with a lot of choice-based games, the player won't go "wtf" when he/she dies. Could be a lot better though, but don't give up!