Excellent first attempt
On the record, I watched your second one before this and I think I enjoyed this first one much better =). This is even more awesome considering this is your first video =). I left a review for your second video, but to expand on those points for this first one, I liked how you took it slower, expanded on the jokes, and threw in conversations this time rather than tons of one-liners like in the second. I think it was much more funnier as a result =).
Despite this video being your first, I think there was less jerking in it than in the second. I did notice a background for Gumshoe was missing, which obviously is a problem, lol. Otherwise, an excellent first attempt that, ironically, is better than your second, in my opinion =D. Excellent job.