Bleh
Well, there's nothing ehre worth protecting.
You have admitted you can't even write a storyline and I am NOT protecting something just because you are begging for it.
If you need a story line, go to the forums, don't upload this stuff here. Or actually try to write your own stuff.
Its not that i cannot write a storyline.. its just that i dont have time to do it.. so im looking for people that can collaborate and help me finish it..
Hmm. not bad...
Good for an alpha, but it loses points because:
Bads:
-I think the music puts this over the Alpha limit; get rid of it if you submit again.
-Just needs plenty of cleanup...
Goods:
-Really TRYING gets you points in my book
Judgment: Keep going!