the arps are well done
good trance saw use. can't deny that. i think you're pushing the distortion barrier with all the low end in this one...it sounds loud at the expense of any sense of dynamics. The song would be a ridiculous amount better if mixed well under the 0 db digital limit and them only compressed and limited slightly to lop of undetectable peaks. As it is...I can already tell that the waveform is going to look like a continuous set of square waves if opened in an audio editor. on top of this, the psychological compression algorithm used in mp3 encoding already causes a 0 db limited song to clip due to compression artifacts.
sense of melody is great though. and the ending was nice. the raw talent is there...it just needs some refinement. in fact i think some of arp use is extraordinary, so that should be commended.