Hmm
What can I say? Well many things perhaps. The sound was ok, and the music fitted perfectly in this flash. Drawings were good, but I noticed that you used a bit too much turns and zooms of a single frame, and also that scene with the smoke and fire...yeah that looked really awkward lol. But hey, this flash showed some good points for you as well. But this is somehow remarkable for a two-day project, so I guess it all fits together.
Overall - 7/10 because of the lack of time spent on this project AND...no solid structure from start to finish, (but the drawings turned me on :D)