What?
Please do something more original. I'm not saying that to imply that I'm giving you a low score because you used madness, but it seemed everything in this was a poorly implemented element ripped from other madness videos.
For example, the entire situation with the pie, and the message "No pie for you" was taken from the Christmas Madness. And furthermore, I question whether you created anything in this yourself, apart from the conversations riddled with cliche.
And another thing: Your animations need to be much more fluid. For example, in the beginning when he is aiming with the rifle, instead of it moving around, it just snapped into place, then disappeared and replaced by a pistol (or whatever gun that was supposed to be).
In summation, work harder.