Excellent!
Your animation skills are slick! Great details on the characters! And the effects you used are what indie animation artists dream of doing! I'm sure if you continue in this direction you can score a few spots on the Top 50. Just start wokring on building up original stories and you'll do great things for newgrounds. The way your characters look remind me of an old flash. I think it's called "Element Trailer."
Good job!
Thanks. I tried to pay more attention to detail in general in this particular flash since there is a lot of flack about how unconsistent my art style is. Well, I'll keep at it until I get it right. As far as the original story, to give you a brief insider, it's about a young girl whose father gave her life away in a ritual in exhange for ascension. Now his daughter is spending the remainder of her life trying to get back what her father gave away before her own demise. I never hear of Element but now you peeked my own interest. I will have to check it out. Thanks again for a wonderful review.
Put a damn preloader. Lol.
Damn that scared me half to death. I was waiting for it to load, meanwhile check out some other submissions, and suddenly earshattering music banged out of the computer and made me fall off the chair in shock.
The graphics are fine, anime styled and above average, but definitely not the best. The motion wasn't too fluent and it was a bit tweaky. It looks absolutely 2d. Some shading should do the trick.
About the anime series, care to explain a bit about that? I have to say that the opening intro aroused my interest.
~I gave it an 8/10, and 4 stars. Hope it's saved. (I took off most of the points because there was no freaking preloader.)
Sorry about the loud sound, I know this will not justify it, but I wanted to make sure you were awake when you started to view the submission. Adrenaline is a good thing! Anyway, I will work on the motion in the future for that is my own personal grip as well. The series itself in general is about a young girl who has to pay for her father's mistakes and try to earn her life back. This is very loose, but I don't want to truely give the story away for it will be better explained in the anime short that is in the works.
Very cool.
I like it a lot. Keep up the good work!
Thank you. I will do my best.
interesting
well drawn, the only thing missing is start/stop points. it looped before i realized it started over. other than that, it looks good
Once again I do appologize for this. I realize that the play and stop but are just as important as the flash itself but I honestly did have comp issues which is why there wasn't one added. I will make sure to add one to this submission soon.
Not too shabby
The animation is really good, the music's good, it's....well, good
I'm very pleased that it was found to be decent.