Shame?
The title doesn't seem to work and the storyline is slow to the point. A lot of time went into the production, that's clear. Animation shows good work. Need to bring two together.
Reviews for "Shame by the Slice"
BaconMask responds:
The Official title was "Revenge of the Floating Manager", but I guess I forgot to tack it on.
Thanks for taking the time to review!
ok dude
I didnt like this at all but you have great animation skill you just need to make a better story line...i dont mean to offend you at all in this i just didnt like the falsh
BaconMask responds:
No offense at all man, I really appreciate you taking the time to review. My style ain't for everyone.
daaauumn man! that was scary!
wicked cool, smooth animation with great secuences.and it was pretty dope, great job man!
BaconMask responds:
Hey, thanks a lot for watching and reviewing! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
Pretty good there buddy
I liked it a lot, smooth animation, the audio was good, everything about it was good. There is only one thing I think needs improvement, and that is the flow of the dialogue. In the beginning I think you were trying to portray some of the characters being a little slow witted, but the dialogue was way way too slow. Reaction time between the characters responses was also a little on the slow side. The dialogue itself was fine just needs a little tightening up. Cheers ^^
BaconMask responds:
Great point, and I will definately take it into consideration with the second half! I'm glad you liked it and glad that you reviewed! Thanks for the help!
Hah
Well look at the pizza this way,its better than dominos.Lookin forward to the next one!
BaconMask responds:
Just about anything is better than Dominos! I swear, that's some crap pizza.
Thanks a lot for the review bro!