lol Poor Jim.
I really like your series. You have an unique style to it and it's good to see your improving it.
My only problems are they're no voice overs for the characters. The VA club on NG can get you all the voices you need and heck ask me and I'll VA for ya too. (I VA alot in my toons. :P)
Anyway if your just avioding the Voices to aviod lip sync then just pull an illwillpress and just have them talk and move with know mouths.
Also: I'm looking forward to what evil jary will bring. ^^
A great plot is already in the works for Jary, just you wait.
(title in work)
^^Good Points^^
Honestly a lot better than most Jim stuff that I've watched. Most of the stuff isn't very memorable, but this one sort of was. It had pretty good graphics and effects, and an interesting storyline.
^^Needs Improving^^
Well, nothing really much to say down here.
I'm glad that the Needs Improving section is bare. Glad you think it's getting better! ^_^
Loved the evolution
You're certainly taking strides in the right direction with these flash. I wish you'd do them more often, but whenever we see another one, you've given us more updates and changes.
I personally like the way that you've got rid of the black lines around everything, it mkaes the animations look less like a cartoon that way.
The one thing I've got to know is when are you going to add voices for this? You wouldn't have to animate mouths for them, as certain other series don't, like Weebl & Bob for example. Was that you yourself we heard as the "creatOr"?
How long will it be, before we can see the next part?
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The reason that I haven't added voices is that I am just not a good voice actor. That was me you heard in the flash as the creator, but believe me the only reason I did that segment is because I knew it was funny. Another reason is that IF i were to give them voices, I would have to basically connect with people over the internet who would be willing to do a voice or two, and be able to keep in touch with them as long as I have the series running, and if I lose one of them, then I have a major problem. The reason "voiced" flashes do so well is good voice acting, and available voice actors, I'll use Legendary Frog as an example. LF basically does the voices for his characters, and he is a pretty good voice actor, the only character's he doesn't voice are Sal, Senya and Kerrigan, Sal is voiced by a friend of his, Senya is voiced by another friend of his, and Kerrigan is voiced by his sister, all very accessible people. I have considered it time and time again, and I just don't have enough people around me that are good at voice acting to make it practical in my cartoons. IDK maybe someday. Thanks so much for reviewing. ^_^
-Jimtopia
Good
-Good-
I thought that your graphics were decent, although I perfered the backgrounds to the characters. There was some humor, the part with the door was funny. I liked the part with the narrarator.
-Bad-
What I didn't like was that Jim didn't have any speech. It was kind of wierd that you had the voice of yourself and bot Jim.
~Review Request Club~
Thanks for the review.
Good
Its weird and crazy. It has some good effects and ideas. I liked the door/sound situation. It could probalby do with some links to previous Jim films withing the movie, otherwise its fine.
Thanks for the review man!