I think this needs a bit of work
Honestly, your animation is not at all fluid. You have a decent way of carrying a story, but I dont like the story. This is kind of an opinion thing, but I dont much find it funny or anything like tha.
As a flash, it was kind of stale, and once again you should learn to animate a little smoother when you do animate. So decent flash just not my cup of what haves ya