wow
I'll admit, that the storyline kinda gets a fast past start, but from what I see its going to be one hell of a series.
p.s.
ur graphics kick ass
Reviews for "Awakening"
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not sure if i understood much...
Interesting.
The pacing could have been a little quicker. Also, if you're going to hold the viewer in the beginning before you cut to the first visual then try to make the audio storytelling easier to follow. Sounds a bit muffled, and at one point I wasn't sure if they were really gunshots. I actually thought it was just a scene from someone's apartment and the noises were the neighbor's tv. Anyway though, it was interesting (and short) enough to make me want to see the next episode (I wish the link worked) so good job.
i hope part 2 will be longer..............
but over all it was pretty sweet
Brilliant!
Your minimalist approach helps to sell the feeling of emptyness, and desolation. No need to change a thing! love it! Very cinematic