Not bad, but not very origional.
Not that I didn't enjoy listening, it's just that the C major, to E, to E# diminished is used in just about every trance song I've heard.
I would suggest every other bar to make the 2nd-7th beats a staccato arpeggio, and every 4th bar a fill in. An example would be E%u266D, to E minor, then bring the mood back up with a major chord.
Throughout the song you used quite a few filter automations. You did a good job with them, but they were also slightly over-used.
Lastly, I recommend continuing the theme through a chorus, with hightened "energy"
Just a few tips, I don't mean to intrude.
All in all, This was well worth the time to listen to.
-Ethan Mendelson, Audio Division.