Really Well Done.Great Job.
Though it wasn't perfect, I was much more enthusiastic about your last Dr.Steel work.Some parts I could have done without, and it seemed like you were trying to go in a somewhat different direction. Not that it's bad, just be careful. Obviously when you build a reputation for yourself, people will have expectations. And your character should always be resected, just dont shill out and keep it meaningful. You probably already knew, but I'm just saying it anyway.Then ending was great, and he really looked powerful despite a corny element he seemed to have.This has alot of potential.Looking forward to you (assumably) next submission!