beauty is skin deep until you cut them open
this is definitely thought out. i don't have ne insults for you.
i can sea the time restrictions your animation style gives you - or otherwise your flash version itself - but i wouldn't say graphic quality is essential to this. in fact, for this particularly it is suiting bc of it's grotesque and undefined entirety. i think that's wut makes it all the better neway. if nething, i'd only be picky about your blood; blood is vital to alfred, so you could have made the blood appear more obscene, but that's nothing for which to take points off.
i really liked your use of different cinematic (should that be wut it's really called) techniques, and your success with dissolving humor into drama.
i'd wish that your other animations were as perfected, or that your storylines were as well developed as in this animation.