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Reviews for "Haphazard Episode 1"

Good job

I loved it^^ it's really funny and it has a wacky story and i really like that hehe. Cant wait for ep. 2^^

nice

Wow traditional animation, nice. It didnt flow well though, the characters textures kept changing and there actions where alittle to corkey. Some parts that u animated looked awsome, but others lacked proper timing in the motion or lacked strong key frames. I liked the voice of the frog though, he sounded like he was slightly retarded.

Good effort.

First off, I must tip my hat at the fact that you guys at least tried to veer away from the typical tweened look. Unfortunately, your fbf skills are seriously lacking, but I can at least can see your intentions in some of these movements and acting moments.

There's a lot of jitter and ackward staging. Your shot composition sometimes feels wonky. Story is also uninspired. Random characters meet in a random place inexplicably. There needs to be more substance.

For me, most of the humor fell flat, and the only thing I found myself laughing at was the voice of the frog. He sounds like he has a mental handicap, but I don't think that was on purpose. Maybe you should spin it that way though. :D

It's a cut above most of the stuff here, but it's still very very subpar. Keep on practicing, improve your fbf craft, and make something better.

I liked it.

I really thought it was good.

fair.

This was a fair anim. The frog's voice doesn't seem to match, seems like it would be deeper, more bass, less baritone perhaps. Kind of reminds of those old toons we used to watch in the 70's with the Beatles, the dancing cheese and conjunction junction.

Over-all very decent.