ADD THE LOAD SCREEN
Dude seriously hurry and add that load screen, I sat for what seemed like five minutes staring at the same screen, not knowing how long it was going to take. Secondly, I'm not sure this is a game. It's more like an interactive story. You have told us exactly what to do, and when to do it. The player needs some choice. The only challenge that was in this game was figuring out where you were going to have the next action button pop-up.