I remember seeing the first file a long time ago and I thought that it was brilliant back then. This one is of just as high quality and I thourghly enjoyed it.
However I did think that the voice work did kinda spoil the feel of the animation as it was kind of mumbled and didnt sound to great compared to the rest of the sound work. Also some parts of the animation looked a bit off from the rest (running at the guards, boot when accelerating).
Dont take my criticism the wrong way this is a fully acomplished flash and you should be proud to use it as an example of your work. Keep on going as the plot, although done to death, is inreaging and the characters are worthy of your time to develop them furthur.