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Reviews for "The art of Writing"

It was a beautiful piece, but a thing...

to consider would include the length. I understand it was meant to be a short animation but when depicting the history of any concept, one must remember to exploit the depth of that history or else the impression left upon the viewer is limited. I suggest an extension of the movie in both ways, bringing it back to possibly the creation of the world before man in chinese myth or depicting how the world achieves balance after the dragon comes forth.

very beautiful

it was a very inspired piece of work

Very impressive.

The art in this video was beautiful absolutely beautiful wonderful job. All I wanted to see was more. Best submission I have seen today.

OK

Having a Chinese background, I can understand what you are trying to do. Many Chinese characters were created to represent what they mean. However, you did well in conveying this with only some of the characters. "Fire", "Ear", and "Fish", was done well, but you could've done much better with water and other things.

The guy below me obviously has the mind of a child

Brilliant. Graphics were simple in design, but the way you brought them together made it complex. The style was very unique and the idea seems very original. This was something obviously inspired like you said and has a nice meaning to it. This is something to appreciate and I'm glad I logged onto NG today to see it. Keep up the great work.