I really like this song, both original and this one. But this one, needs to have a deeper kick at 0:32. Atleast, if it's possible. And really like the raw part at 0:57. I could never do it better myself. But at 1:25 I would make the music louder slightly, not that you can hear it get louder.
So yeah, awesome work and keep it up.
PS: Saw you're pretty popular at YouTube, though you only have like 3 vids... That deserves a subscription!