The Text
I found the text difficult to read. Esp the M's and W's.
Maybe it's just me but yeah.
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Reviews for "AUTOMATON Prt 1"
ummm....
i pressed 4 random buttons for the bridge part and it actually worked. either it was a reallllyyyyy lucky guess or its broken
Horribly long intro.
Anyone who reads the reviews before playing please avoid this game. The intro has to be one of the longest intros I've ever had to suffer through.. after the intro I didnt feel like playing it at all. Very boring story about something that no one cares about. But if you're into puzzle games or whatever I guess you'd like this if you can make it through the intro.
Not bad, if a bit easy
That was enjoyable. Thanks! The puzzles were a bit on the simple side. Also, the entire narrative would benefit (greatly) from a spell and grammar check- the story is broken up by a lot of bad sentence fragments, and shifting tone (from somewhat formal, to starting lines with 'so' etc...).
ex:
The instruction page changes tense from "woke up" to "know nothing" and then back to "all you knew"...
"the most special about the automaton..."
"want's"
"TO FIND THE EGG'S"
etc. . .
I normally don't spend much time criticizing spelling and grammar, but this is an attempt at a narrative, and should be proof-read.
The game itself was enjoyable- would benefit from less blunt hints and more deceptive puzzles. Plenty to like, plenty to improve. Good stuff.
good
good but i am stuck on the exit.do i have to fill it up with first part water?