just a few things
could be different.The way it ends with the riff fading,could have just put 2 or 3 more notes or chords and let it ring.
The title aways reminds me of the lyrics from Dirty Cries "we wait,stuffed martyrs in your skies..."
and there is something I noticed about the lyrics,you sometimes use the first verses in the end.That happened in Prophet Of No Innocence.Or you repeat the chorus like in When The Lights Go Out and Broken.
I've been learning from that,but I was wondering if you just repeated the verses in the end because you wanted to get rid of that part of did you think it would sound good?
I guess it sounds good either way but I was curious about that...
Ahh and there was a song you didn't finish,Mustache Rides.It's been a year now.
Anyways,this song is great,could be heavier,but it's still great.The beguinning of the solo reminded me of.. I don't know,I guess Eye Of The Tiger,there's a riff they repeat a few times that sounds just like the beguinning of this solo.
AHH!!How did he get that sound using guitar rig 4???i use that too and my stuff sounds like crap no matter how I record it!