pretty good
But not that great. :(
Only reason being, the story was pretty random. I mean seriously, it's random. First of all, WHY THE HELL ARE THERE FRUIT CLOCKS!?>P Second of all, What's up with Kirby being in the same universe as mario? Seriously, no characters outside of the Mario Universe can be in Mario movies. (Except for Sonic, 'cause he kicks ass!) >D And another thing, why did you have to draw everything yourself? Couldn't you've ripped some sprites from Paper Mario: The Thousand year door? Another thing, WHAT'S UP WITH PEOPLE TURNING INTO SUPER SAENS! Seriously, this is like Mario colliding with DBZ, in a bad way! Bottem line, I'm not saying your movie's terrible, just not great, meaning nothing that would impress me. Great idea, but just a random story isn't going to get you anywhere. Nice job on this move dispite my major complants. And one more peice of advice, when doing a Mario movie or any movie that relates to any video games, like Sonic or Starcraft, be sure to rip out some sprites from that certain game before you make the actual movie. Good luck next time and I hope you'll do better than before! :)