ahhhhh terroist
i dont know what im scared more buy, the fact that there are terroists in the work place or the fact that guy was staring at him asleep when he was naked and was then planning to make a documentary about it.
5/5
Reviews for "Terrorism & The Workplace"
Funny
It was funny, but not much in the way of graphical values.
Terrorists Are Smelly!
HAHAHAHA! "You HAVE to emphasise TERRORIST. It's un-American not to."
SO true!
Sure the animation was awful and the dialogue wasn't that funny, kind of confusing actually what about terrorist employees, documentaries, and talking to wives. If you had clarified what you were talking about... Maybe a tiny bit of back story, thrown a couple more scenes in there (not just two -basically- stick figures by the water cooler), maybe if you had explained all the random points about TERRORISM that you made...
Maybe then I'd vote 5. But for now I voted 4 cause British accents are fucking awesome.
Sure it was okay
I liked how much you emphasised on TERRORIST all the time, also it seemed scary that he saw him naked... at least that is what he said with the TERRORIST tatoo on his chest. Also what would be the programme that the documentray would be on?
Cambo responds:
Yeah I didn't really explain what the documentary was going on there, I cut out a big chunk of the script because I thought it made it too obvious and clunky. Basically originally Ryan (the grey dude) was making just obsessed with Hank, and by framing him as a terrorist he was able to spend all his time focusing on him and getting everyone else to talk about him under the guise of national security. That took too long to explain though, and in order for it to be funny it'd need to be more thoroughly explored, so I just scrapped it.
The documentary would just be on Hank himself. A pretty dull one really.
Also, you HAVE to emphasise TERRORIST. It's un-American not to.
Stereotyperific!!
Classic stereotypical wrokplace...
Graphics could of been better, and it was a little short...
i gave u 8 out of 10 overall, and i always give half of wat i put for overall, so 8/2 = 5!!!!
(ur lucky i suck at math...)
Cambo responds:
Thanks a lot buddy, yeah I was going for the classic workspace sort-of feel. You're right, too, the graphics could probably have been better, but I wanted the office to look sparse, and I was too lazy to properly put arms and legs when sticks, I think, work just as well.
But having said that, I did try to put a lot of emphasis into the characters heads and faces, because that's where the humour is, right?
I'm glad you suck at maths, and don't you DARE let anybody tell you otherwise.
What an awesome first review. Have a good day.