Near the top.
I've been noticing you've been submitting quite a bit of flash into NG. I must say you're definitely on your way to the front page, your drawings are really nice and clean, I like your flashes (only three so far) but I'm expecting more being submitted. I just decided now would be a good time to review for you. The only problem I found is that a lot of scenes are really slow-paced, like in your other Naruto flash, it was very long. Other than that, keep up the good work!
Wow, thanks for the nice review.
Woah. Can I vote 1000 for graphic instead of 10?
You really do the best hentai on newgrounds man, the two other were really nice but this one...I think I'm drooling. Seriously, my favorite anime and my two favorite girls with lez action, its perfect! I cant wait for the next one.
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overall i liked this flash, but in some of the first of the movie the scrpits were cut off,not being a flash artist my self im not sure y it happened but pherhaps u can post it on the NG BBS to find out how to fix that.p.s. i didn't know when to watch the flh or look for the easter egg, if your going to put an easter egg in you should probalbly put it on a still screen to give time to look for it, if it was on a still screen excuse my ignorance
Those are some good ideas. Thanks.
Porn is always nice
The subtitles were messed up in some portions and mispelled. But since there was lesbian action I let it slide.
To be continued. :(
Oh my god!! AWESOME!! And, this will keep anyones attention, trust me. The graphics were GREAT, your a very good anime artist. The style was awesome! The sound, was good yet after some licks it was annoying... This is truly one of the best flashes I have ever seen sincerely. In fact, I don't think I've ever seen a moving hentai flash before, I think this would be the first. Very original, man this was so good you could be hired to animate porn! Whens #2 coming out?
Wow, glad you liked it. I am not sure when I will have part two posted. It maybe as long as two months. Thank you for the very nice review.