I'd like to see an ending
I liked what I saw, but I didn't like what I didn't see, if you know what I mean. And by what I didn't see, I mean the end of your flash. As it is, your flash builds up great momentum as it progresses, but it's building momentum to throw itself off of a cliff, which hurts... alot. Right now, there's not even a cliff-hanger, there's just a flash, falling off of a cliff... not very entertaining.
It's good, man, now finish it.