Reviews for SSAM #5

[GoldenToaster]

This made my eyes well up with tears.

I love how you depict the main character as a sweet, loyaal, naive person who sincerely loves the girl. The girl is a heartless, selfish #$^$%, and you really depict those negative qualities as they truly are: twisted and odious.

Even though I couldn't bear to watch this kind of stuff too often, your work is sincere and very respectable. So many flash movies rely on violence to hold the viewers' attention, and the fact that this does not have to speaks highly of this movie.

-GoldenToaster-

[Maison122]

Good story

it was a good story but the ending was bad maybe you could do another one where hes lying down on the ground bleeding and shes holding him,all and all it was brilliant

[Bazzatron]

so moving

this is a review for this and the others in the series

please dear god dont let it end there! story had me close to tears from begining to end, strange, it seems kinda like my life, right down to the scar on my face. funny how you never kno what you had til its gone.
amazing piece. but please, anything, it must conclude! >.<

you tell a good story. a story i would have loved to tell. your a truly good person. a heart full of love. just remember your alive. its my favourite feeling. just knowing it makes me happy.
i hope you find your someone
love out
Bazz xox

[Mewtata]

Pretty good

truthfully I would have preffered a happy ending, but it was well made. The only thing that could have been done better is that the red head would have been introduced earlier.

[falcon6225]

What did this guy do?

Why do random people keep on knifing/punching/shooting at this one guy for no reason? Does he smell funny? Does he go around kicking people in the shins in his free time? But seriously, story-wise I think it would be much stronger if there was something from this guy's past/present that explains this seemingly-random yet uncanny attraction to people wanting to hurt him. You can throw in as much random who/what/where/when devices into your plot, but it is the "why" factor that will keep your audience captivated.